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Hahahahah! I loved this poem, it was amusing and fun to read! But, the only thing that is missing is the sweet tea
. Anyways, one little tweak, in writing you never use texting acronyms. So, instead of FYI you could use: "since she thinks it's..." Other than that it's a great poem! Keep on writing!
Wow.This poem just like an old diary.I mean your poem are so amazing(full with historical moment).I like the way you put the funny situation on your poem,
(e.g)
*Most people out there are laughing and smiling,
not us,
especially after Uncle Willie gets drunk,
and trys to marry a skunk.*
as a conclusion,I really amazed with your poem.So keep writing,wish to see more masterpiece from you!:D
Absolutely love it really good not really rhymey but then again i guess it has to be. the picture goes with it really well the best part is that it's all fairly true!