NightKaizer

HEELLO Me and My Thoughts, You know, I've read a few of your poems already and I find that this one is the most hilarious. The more I look at ...

HEELLO Oreos Are Life, Yo, I didn't know you were a poet! A pretty good poet too. A 'peculiar' one I might say as well. Get it? Ok I'll stop. ...

HEELLO dystopian monkey, Shipwrecked. Stranded out at sea. When you've lost all hope, there's the "voice of a loving child" that saves you. When you start to do "the dance ...

HEELLO alex blackwell, I'm not sure what this poem is about. But that's good. Make the reader think. In just a few words, a few lines, you've caught their attention. ...

HEELLO ghost, Fire and water, eh? Two opposing elements that are famous for their everlasting war against each other. One is smooth, calm. The other is rough, wild. Both are ...

HEELLO Deep Roses, A poem of being alone. In response to your author's note, it's not bad and quick poems are what attract the readers the most. Like I say ...

HEELLO fortis, A poem about cancer. You used some descriptive words and phrases in there to describe cancer "eating away at the roots of your brain". I can almost see ...

HEELLO Me and My Thoughts, A poem on the why, when, and hows of war. I have to say, this is a fantastic poem. Short, deep, rhymes, and has a ...

HEELLO Morrigan, A poem about trying to fit in. I feel you. When you enter a new class, a new school, a new group of people, you are instantly left ...

HEELLO Kyrian Kane, Preparing for the war, famine, and plague. "Fire" was a nice way to start the passage. One word beginnings always catch the reader's attention rather than a ...

HEELLO Tiger Aye, Lyrics of being an enemy to yourself. At first I couldn't really see this in the first stanza. It only appears toward the end of the song. ...

HEELLO Digital Squeak, Lyrics on Nuclear Winter. Chilling to the bone I must say. The destruction of humankind. "Bombs had fallen, bombs on bombs" meaning we've destroyed ourselves. We've gone ...

HEELLO Anonymous, Hell. I'm guessing you have your reasons to pray to see hell. I've never particularly had a dream of hell before, but I'm curious to know how it ...

HEELLO featherstone, Nice job here. I always thought Death and Transformation were two different things but I guess they are binded together by some unknown force as well. The first ...

HEELLO Pheonix Kitten, The ones who are not so lucky. I guess nobody can be born in a rich aristocratic family or a happy united family full of love and ...