HEELLO Anonymous,
Hell. I'm guessing you have your reasons to pray to see hell. I've never particularly had a dream of hell before, but I'm curious to know how it feels. From what you've described, it's not a lovely place. Opposite of heaven, that's for sure.
This post is like a warning for all readers. Some people may not even warn anyone- they're too afraid to even mention the word. Other's don't believe in hell or the afterlife and stuff like that. Therefore, there would be different interpretations of this post.
The theme kind of changes from the beginning to the end of the passage. It started from a personal experience to a message to readers. This makes the post kind of...odd? I can't find the word. This turned from a story to a warning to readers. The shift makes the post confusing.
Still, hell is an interesting topic to discuss. A tip- you could add more descriptive details here and there to make your post more realistic!
Heaven and hell,
Night Kaizer
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