HEELLO Kyrian Kane,
Preparing for the war, famine, and plague. "Fire" was a nice way to start the passage. One word beginnings always catch the reader's attention rather than a whole, tiring paragraph. I like how you kept each paragraph short so it feels more comfortable for the eyes. Huge, bulky chunks of words discourages lazy readers (like me).
I agree with you when you said that elders always think their way is right and the child's way is wrong. Adults just can't trust kids like us. They think we're not mature enough, we have no experience. What they don't know is that we can see the world directly. Adults are no longer innocent. But children are, children have innocence on their side. And with innocence comes a whole new way of thinking, a whole new way of seeing.
I guess that's why we are the war, famine, and plague. Because only the adults could bring such destruction. Children for once know better than the elders. Trust them, maybe the world will be a better place.
Trust them,
Night Kaizer
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