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For some ridiculous reason I felt like this poem would be such a great idea for satire. If you could use the same thing about not being able to sleep ...

I did enjoy this poem and the rhyme scheme created a delightful rhythm. Though I think in the last line a comma should be added after "fate". The idea of ...

I enjoyed the versatility of this poem. It was very double-sided, though it felt quite undecided near the beginning. But the ending was much more definite and so: easier to ...

I particularly enjoyed the imagery in this piece. I enjoyed the ending and the picture of a healing sun coming out from behind the thunderclouds or maybe ash clouds. It ...

Hi there Steve I hope you are having a great day/afternoon/night. This is going to be a little bit of an unorthodox review but I really do hope that it ...

Hi there, Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions There's a certain sense of underlying rhythm you don't really expect from the poem. ...

Hi there, Brigadier Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions This is a very intriguing piece of poetry. I see it strongly resembles ...

Hi there, Brigadier Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions For a short poem, I thoroughly enjoyed this and really hope you have ...

Hello there, Brigadier Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. Well, honestly this is probably going to be quite short as there isn't much to ...

Hi there, Buranko Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions I find this poem on its own quite confusing. Most probably a play ...

Hi there, Buranko Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions I like this poem as a whole but just seem to feel the ...

Hi there, Horisun Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions I loved this poem, the rhyme worked perfectly and the mix between adult ...

Hi there, Forever Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. First Impressions This is a really nice poem, I like the rhyme scheme. The sound ...

Hello Buranko, Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. I think this is a really neat poem. I really like the first stanza but I ...

Hello there! Lehmanf here with a review! This is a very short, interesting poem. I think honestly you haven't really established any flow. The meaning is quite clear but like ...