Nate

Need more tildes. Excuse the bump. I'm working on something.

It's a known fact that the more tildes you have, the better your writing. So I clearly did not have enough tildes in this work. Ah well. Excuse the bump.

This work is like a fine wine. My appreciation for it only grows as it ages.

Emma, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Please do not critique another member's critique. If you feel something was inappropriate, then contact a mod.

Be careful to get titles right! I was looking at your topic and thinking, "James Patterson wrote Breakfast at Tiffany's? What?" Anyways, I fixed it appropriately.

Thanks for the book review! Sounds interesting.

Topic locked until author reviews more.

You have to give it more time :)

*Locked for plagiarism*

Shouldn't this be in Scripts? Or did you place it in Lyrics on purpose?

Great poem CS. I hope everything works out and best of luck.

Wow, you already edited this. “It depends…” I really like how you changed this. Excellent. The title is also much better than before. Always awesome to see something that just ...

Umm... I'm guessing you hit new topic instead of post reply. In the future, you want to hit post reply when reviewing a piece.

I'm Allison ;)

This is the third most popular piece on YWS since we started doing gold stars? Goodness...