Published November 28, 2009
I know its a bit repetative, but this is what i have.
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One day I will rise,
And other I will fall!
Like every Great Nation,
I'll be like them all.
I'll get to my peak
and can't go any further.
Like every Great Nation,
There will be a great fall.
But unlike every Great Nation,
Mine will be slow and small!
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Hi! I really liked this piece I only saw one thing that really bugged me!
I think you mean, "And another I'll fall!" or something like that. Otherwise it was good!Great job!