Published January 8, 2010
Once upon a sunny blue day in Grundo while perchancing upon a hapless crystal, Teddy Ruxpin (henceforth "Teddy") and Grubby fell into a pit! But it was okay because at the bottom of the pit were all these awesome toys. Yet Grubby (being Grubby!) starting eating all the toys!
"Grubby!" Teddy exclaimed as only a talking personified bear can, "Stop eating the toys!"
"Oh, sorry Teddy," said Grubby. But he was so hungry!
Right then, the toys came alive. "Oh noes!" said Grubby.
~~~~stay tuned for chapter deux!~~~~
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It's a known fact that the more tildes you have, the better your writing. So I clearly did not have enough tildes in this work. Ah well. Excuse the bump.