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HELOOO YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!! :3 I am actually transfixed by the parallel world-building you have done in just a few stanzas! :O! The contrast between the Hatchetts in Heaven and the ...

HAI HAI FELLOW NEW YWS MEMBER !!!!!!! :3!!! I am actually transfixed by this poem! There is something so haunting and quiet about the way you’ve turned a simple adverb ...

HAI HAI YWS MEMBER!!!!!!! I am actually transfixed by this entire chapter! :O! Looking at all these parts together makes the whole story feel so much more intense... it is ...

HII FELLOW YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am actually transfixed by this story! :O! The way you captured that quiet and domestic tension between Papyrus and Sans in this new surface life ...

HIYAAAAA WRITER BUGGIE!!! I am actually transfixed by this latest update! :O! The way Empress is so exasperated with her status box refusing to give her more info is just ...

HELLOOOOO YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am actually transfixed by this story! :O! Reading about Oliver felt like carrying a huge physical weight because his life at home and school is just ...

FELLOW YWS MEMBER!!!!!! I am absolutely CAPTIVATED by this!! :D! Using that Taylor Swift quote as a launchpad was such a brilliant move because it sets this massive and cinematic ...

HIYA YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!! I am genuinely riveted by this! :O! Reading this felt like a physical weight and t’s so heavy and raw! The way you describe that predatory cycle ...

HIYA YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!! I might be in love with it :O! As I read, I got chills like sad ones (idk what to call them I get them when I ...

FELLOW YWS MEMBERRR!! Literally my situation Ily you already :3 Here are some tips -try adding moreish bolded or italic wordings to the poem or line to enhance the depth ...

HOLY CREATIVE HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THIS!!!! At first I thought the title was cool so I clicked and I thought the words made sense for some reason ...

fellow yws member!!! I love this poem!! Even though it’s so heavy, seeing that double dash right after the part about battle wounds is truly amazing because it makes the ...

FELLOW YWS MEMBER!!! I love this poem!!!! Your stanzas really build on each other so well! The way you describe the scene is straight up beautiful and it is truly ...

FELLOW YWS MEMBER!!! I love this one!!!! Your long range of words really enhance each stanza really well! The description on the setting a view is so good that I ...

Fellow new YWS member!!!! Here are some tips! If you are to write a poem, like a story, try to add italics and bolded words to empathize the line or ...