Nargles

Hey there, I'm Nargles and am here to give you a review on your poem. Firstly, welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy your time on here. Secondly, is this ...

Hey! This is a good poem! I really enjoyed you, the way you captured the feeling of night time and sleeplessness and all the thoughts that come with it is ...

Hey, this is good. It is nice and simple but has a good meaning behind it. You could have more figurative language and all that stuff, but it is still ...

Hey, So I like this poem. It is very emotional and interesting. I was wondering if it was also talking about drugs as well, because it has certain imagery that ...

Hey Skye, Nargles to review for you today! I rather liked this poem, it is very dark and sad. You lay out your thoughts very clearly and the theme is ...

Hey, so this is not bad, you have some good ideas here that need to be built on and improved. I am going to be harsh but hopefully it will ...

Hey! So I am hopefully going to give you a good review today! Starting you have written a beautiful poem filled with some great metaphors and language. I love the ...

Heyo! Nargles to review for you this review day. So, overall I thought this was a really good piece, it was nicely written and had a great feel to it. ...

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Hey, This is great! I really like this, it is dark and grim but also beautiful at the same time. So now time to criticise and hopefully help :) Firstly, ...

Hey, I think this is fantastic! You capture the feelings you are/were going through yet you do it very simply in a way a lot of people can understand. In ...

Hey, This is really good. It tells a really sad yet really great story. So, the pros and cons of this poem. Pros- The way you described the story is ...

Heya! So, I will attempt to review this for you, once I've made sense of it...... Ok, I think I understand now, or at least more than I did. I ...

Hey, So I'm going to give you a review, hopefully it is good and will help your writing. I'm going to go stanza by stanza, give you feed back on ...

Hi, I'm going to review this poem for you and hopefully it will be of some help. I'm going to do it stanza by stanza and give examples and main ...