Nargles

Hey, So this poem needs some work. I know you mentioned how structure is suppose to be how it is, but that doesn't excuse when you get lazy in flow ...

Ahhhhhhhh, I love it sooo much. Words can't describe my love for it. It is beautifully written and you personify the Earth and the Sun really well. I'm not even ...

You asked, so I answered. This is one of the best you have written so far. You don't overuse the repetition and your flow is good. I don't really have ...

Hey, This is a really good poem and I really related to it. It was written well and you managed the rhyme well. There are only a few places in ...

Hey, I'm Nargles and firstly welcome to YWS, I hope your time here is a happy one filled with lots of fun, laughter and writing. So, now that niceties are ...

Hey, I really like the idea behind this poem, the constant questioning and wondering. It adds an air of innocence, which makes them poem really sweet. One thing I liked ...

Hey, back to review this fantastic piece of poetry. So, I really liked this, personally I don't think it was as good as 'No more' but it is still good ...

Hey, Nargles here to review. First up, the title reminded me of the song 'sweet Caroline' by Neil Diamond, so I was sort of reading it in tune to that ...

Hey! This is really good. I read Birkhoff's poem yesterday and felt inspired to write a palindrome poem too. Unfortunately my inspiration didn't produce anything of note, unlike yours. You ...

Hey, this is really good and deserves to be featured. You have a really wonderful extended metaphor here, and something that I'm sure will help a lot of people, either ...

Hey, I reviewed your poem 'Ten's end' earlier today and when I saw you had posted this I had to read it. I like it, it is really good and ...

Hey! Firstly I want to say that this is really good and is a nice homage to Tennant as the Doctor and his final farewell. The end of time is ...

Ok, Nargles here to review. So, you have something of great potential here and with a bit of editing and fixing up it can be a really good piece of ...

Hey! You have a really good poem and really rather bittersweet in a way. It is a poem that is obviously not just about the act of smoking but the ...

This is great, you have given a wonderful, thoughtful and poetic insight into insomnia. I loved the way you described each type of insomnia, you took great care in all ...