Mysticalxx

This was......interesting. The beginning of this episode, however, is a little too cliche. I mean, you don't NEED to start with saying that moving is really difficult because you're leaving ...

This was quite funny, I must say. :D But I have a question: Have you used crude, informal grammar on purpose ( that is, is it how the text should ...

Well, it was nice! You've got a good plot here, although it's a bit cliche. But no one can be completely original, right? I think the chapter was fine, except ...

It's a really interesting story, and the poem is very nice! :) Although I think you should change the phrase "flowers DIP". I mean, it just doesn't make sense. Maybe ...

Sorry for contradicting you, but the information and opinions you've stated in this article hold little authenticity. It is completely untrue that ''living without technology is like living without ai

I don't mean any offence, but I don't like the way this article encourages the use of social media so much. I mean, dude, people are already way too attached ...

The Percy Jackson series is one of my favourites, and you did a good book review! :) However, the line ' I commence Riordan for his humour" is not completely ...

Wonderful article! This directly addressed the issue most people (mainly kids) face nowadays. Most of us are under the impression that heroes fall under the stereotypical categories: brave, loyal, han

This article definitely needs to be read by the whole world. :) I like both quotes you've mentioned. And yes, the 'beauty' theory is very true. The sad thing is, ...

I love the message this article is conveying. Thanks for getting this out to people! I have read the story you mentioned, and it IS very thought-provoking. A few things; ...

I love it! First of all, because I can relate to this "kid". At least, mostly I can. There aren't much errors, just that you need to punctuate the paragraphs ...

Alright, alright. I've got mixed views about this one. Firstly, the sentence " Meet your expectations and higher them", is not right. It should be " keep high expectations", or ...

I love this article! Simple and to the point, and addressing today's issues and problems clearly. Good work. A tip I could give you though: Using more creative language would ...

aw, cute poem! Original and funny. The rhyming is almost perfect, and ........it's cute! I don't really know what to say. I especially love the Teddy bear's comment. Keep it ...

I love it! This poem did make me smile.......short, simple and heartwarming! It basically lists all the reasons we have to smile in the world. :) There are a few ...