“Teenage” is described as the most challenging part of our lives. This is the time when we disagree with parents the most. We don’t seem to be sure about what’s right and what’s wrong; it is a confusing age. Yes, this is when we are full of energy, but depression takes over at times too. Most teenagers succeed in overcoming the travails of this age when they grow up, but some fall into the darkness.
Teenage
is the age of dreaming, studying hard, making future plans and being
an all-rounder. It is also the age of falling in love for the first
time, making mistakes, breaking up, doing badly in exams and so on.
We,
teens, should not forget that we are the ones who are going to change
the world. We do not need to be millionaires, presidents, or
superheroes. We just need to be good people to make a change.
We
have to love this world and the people living in this world. Most
importantly, we have to love ourselves.
We
do not need to be aware of latest fashion fad or need to look
“gorgeous”. We only need to believe that we are not
failures.
Let’s
keep dreaming, praying and loving. Life is not awful. Teenage doesn’t
have to be a bad time. Rather, it is the perfect time to improve
ourselves.
Never underestimate yourself. Do not listen to anyone’s
negative words. If any of your habits are bad, change them. No one is
perfect and imperfection is good sometimes. No matter how many times
you fall or fail, you are going to stand up again if you have faith.
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Okay, Nire here with a review..
With this wish, I'm leaving you! ♡
First off I need to say Mad, you chose a good topic. Clever decision there. Really at that period of life, teenagers feel hopeless and try to find out solutions to their problems and all that; approximately I should say, they love to have a pat on their back and a sweet smile or just you can do that saying. So, you did a good job there. And, I can see people thanking you for that
You didn't spend much time but that didn't affect your work at all. You said what you had to say. So, I don't think, I can suggest you on much. But, hey, you could use the same paragraph-structure you've used on the first one!
And, I guess you've got your own style! Be outstandinger
~Nire
I love this article! Simple and to the point, and addressing today's issues and problems clearly.
Good work.
A tip I could give you though: Using more creative language would spark more interest in the readers. You could put in similes, metaphors, personifications, anything you like. All these would attract the attention of readers
Overall, it's nice. I especially like the quote at the end.
Hey MadedoOtter!!
This is Eros here to review your beautiful essay!!
I loved reading the essay on teenagers. You have summed up all your views so beautifully in very little words. Thats what I liked about the essay.
The most beautiful part was
"We, teens, should not forget that we are the ones who are going to change the world. We do not need to be millionaires, presidents, or superheroes. We just need to be good people to make a change.".....This one.
I also loved the picture
This picture itself describes every thing....The picture and the essay has got a tongue, you know, they are telling everything so sweetly!!
Continue writing...
Never stop!
Because we all love to read them...
Okay, thanks.
Thanks for the wonderful article .
thanks fr the words every teen should know .
you're most welcome!
Thnks fr th mmrs?
I'm sorry didn't get you Willachilles?
This is so true! I can absolutely relate to this. Can we just have every teenager in the world read it? Please? Yes, no? Little nitpick... instead of "doing badly in exams," I would change it to "poorly..." (Oxford comma?)
It put a smile on my face and hope in my heart <3 Thank you for the words of encouragement--I will save them for a rainy day and don't think I will think twice about sharing them
This is EXACTLY the mindset one should have as they grow in this world. Society is constantly putting the children down, saying horrible things about the younger generations. News flash: Who do you think raised that generation? Hm? That's what I thought....lol
I LOVE reading positive pieces on here
Okay, when I'll edit it, I'll keep your suggestions in mind. Thanks.
I think every teen should read this. Tis is true. There are only little itty bitty minor mistakes. You indented only the first paragraph, and left the others be. You should not indent the first part of a story, and indent all the others.
Also, the word gorgeous should probably have single quotation (') marks instead of double quotation marks. (")
I don't believe I saw anything else, if I missed please excuse me. Anyway, I really liked this piece of writing. Keep writing, and spread the word.
Thank you for your suggestions%uD83D%uDE0A I appreciate that.