Morticiansdaughter19

Hi! Morticiansdaughter here to give my feedback! This was a great poem all the way through, lets just get that out there. I really couldn't find anything wrong with this ...

The ending was spectacular "I happened to us." I just had to say that, know onto the review part. You had some really great lines in your poem such as: ...

That was an interesting poem. There were some things that shocked me which is always good in a poem, which was the line when he mentioned his son. There are ...

That was amazing! Deep and interesting! The first stanza grabbed my attention and right from the get go I knew it was going to be a good poem. It was ...

For the most part since it is your first poem it was good. I would suggest you pursue this since you are creative. But as for the review part, let ...

That was very intense and interesting. For the most part it was very good it has some errors here and there in which I will point out in a bit. ...

In one word I can describe this poem... SPECTACULAR!!! The imagery alone makes you feel like you are in a wooden box being lowered into the cold ground. I like ...

Morticians daughter here to make a few comments! To start off this is an interesting poem, though the question marks through me for a loop. You do know question marks ...

That was beautiful and I am very sorry for your loss. :'(. But I am here to review so I am gonna point out a few things that could be ...

WOW! that was AMAZING! I didn't expect the twist with his wrists, that was very interesting. From the second I seen the title to the very end of the poem ...

First of let me say the theme of this poem is swell. But here comes the review part: The poem is consistent it has not rhythm, at least not one ...

Wow is the only word I can use to describe this. You didn't hold back in this poem, from slavery to the kkk you tell it like it is. The ...

That was a very interesting poem! I like the message behind it, as long as you are yourself and you love what you write, shouldn't that be enough? As for ...

This was a very interesting poem, I really liked it! For the most part I could seen any punctuation errors, which is good! But as for the first line "My ...

This is an interesting poem right from the get go. The rhythm was catchy but then once you hit line 4 it kind of went flat and the rhythm was ...