Morrigan

Hi there, ka67. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. As it is, this work is not a poem. It's a descriptive bit of prose. Just because ...

Hi there, Ary. I noticed a weird thing. Right now, you have seventeen posts, seventeen reviews, and you're seventeen years old. Coincidences are strange, eh? Here is my honest opinion. ...

Hi there, Audy. Wow. This is great. I love it. The images really swept me away. Gosh darn it, I'm so envious of your talent in the field of poetry. ...

Hi there, tteele. This is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. The first thing I noticed is your punctuation. I don't know why there is a space between ...

Hi there, Chelbig! I like this. It's nice. I especially enjoy your sneaky rhymes near the beginning of the poem. Nice one. The end, too, is good. I like the ...

Hi there, Zeus! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to have you. This poem is pretty decent, and with a little more polishing, it'll be really good. I enjoy the wordplay ...

Hi there, dogsy! I really like this poem. Your word choice is lovely, and I really like the ideas presented here. It takes me away in swirling images that also ...

Hi there, Sparky. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Whoo, this is long. Honestly, I think that a lot of the first bit is totally unneeded. ...

hi there, therealme! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to have you! This is quite a short poem, but there's a lot to say about it. I like that you tried ...

Hi there Kyllorac. I like the ideas presented here. They're interesting and new, and that is awesome. There are so many ideas in the world that there aren't many new ...

Hi there, niteowl! I just did this challenge, and I think it's hilarious that we both chose to reference the Egyptian pantheon of gods in our poems =) This poem ...

Hi there, Arizona, and welcome to YWS. It's nice to have new faces around! I like the ideas presented in this, and you hint at images that you could do ...

Hi there, Jkwriting. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. If you're going to title this work summer, I'd expect this poem to be filled with more ...

Hey there. I liked this a lot. The images were great, and all the ands didn't even register to me as wrong. You are allowed to keep the "ands" you ...

Hi there Nargles! Fahrenheit 451 is an excellent book, and I've read it many times. Bradbury is actually my favorite author. He's simply lovely. I really like this poem. You ...