Morrigan

Ahoy, Griffin! I really like a lot of the images in your poem. They're thoughtful and truly convey the feeling of the poem. However, there is a major issue with ...

Hola, annabanana. If this is your first venture into the realm of the free verse, It's pretty good. I like how you compare love to a ball thrown into the ...

Hello, comrade! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I'm going to address the thing that bugged me the most in this poem, and that's the ending. ...

Hello, Lumi. This poem is beautiful. It aches in the very atoms of my being, and honestly? I cried a little bit. Not much, but I did. And that's a ...

Hey there, Wherethewindgoes! I really like this poem. The little asides are great. The imagery is really good, and then the sassy little bits come up, and it adds a ...

Hi there, Wariofart. I don't believe we've met. It's nice to meet you. This is quite well written. I like the simple epiphany at the end, and the way you ...

Hi there, Deanz, and welcome to YWS! It's nice to have new faces around. This poem has a lot of potential. I like the imagery, and your language is pretty ...

Hi, Gee! Long time, no see! First of all, I just want to point out that you posted this poem tomorrow (time zones are fascinating, are they not?). Now that ...

Ahoy there, transcending! I really liked this! You have quite a few really hard hitting lines that made me draw in my breath and think, this really is love. I ...

Hi there, SparkOfDoubt! I started reading this, and at first I thought it was kind of mushy, but then I discovered that I rather liked it. Let me just point ...

Ahoy, rbt00! Welcome to YWS! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I must say, I've never read a poem about a pencil before, and I'm quite ...

Ahoy there, fortis! While this poem has poetic elements, and a clear message, it needs a bit of polishing. You use repetition a lot in your poem, which is a ...

Hi there, ktarantino! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to have you! Note: I'm on mobile, so there may be a few typos in this review. I'll blame autocorrect. First, I ...

Hi, niteowl! Disclaimer: if you find typos, it's because I'm on mobile. This poem is quite beautiful. I see that you'be already recieved a lot of reviews on this piece, ...

Hi there, Skye. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I see what you're trying to do here, and it's interesting. I think, however, that this could ...