Morrigan

Hello, Emilie. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Despite what other people have said about this poem, the repetition of "too" and "would I die" serve ...

Hi, Indiee! It's always a pleasure to read your poetry, and this is no different. I like your imagery, and this will probably be a relatively short review because of ...

Hi, storyweaver. I really enjoyed reading this. It was pretty, and I liked the idea behind it. You use vivid imagery; I was able to visualize what you were talking ...

Hi there. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. The subject of your poem is relatable. I, too, have written poetry about my peers and how disgusting ...

Hi there, indiee! I love the extended metaphor here. It really works (Unless it's literal and I'm digging too deeply (which only happens with good poetry, may I add)). border ...

Hello, shadowhunter. This is an interesting start to a novel. While it's been done before, I can never resist the thrill of trying to find a serial killer. They're just ...

Hi there, nightlyowl! Your descriptions pack quite a punch. You definitely have the "show, don't tell" rule down pat. I also like your action-- it's often difficult to pace action ...

Hi there, vivien. I like the idea of the story, and I like how you got your character to the top of the tree. The motivation for the character to ...

Hi there, Aonar5. I like the subject matter. Futures are important to talk about, and many people can relate to doing something they feel like they've done before. There are ...

Hi there, EmmyLou. You have some really great descriptions here. I love some of the things you do in the second lines of your short stanzas. They really give this ...

Hi, dark. I like that you talked about deltas and rivers. That was my favorite part. No one talks about the parts of rivers, and it really made me think ...

Hi there, TheSoundOfRain. At first, I was thinking that this poem wasn't going to work because I felt that the image of the dragonfly would best be used as a ...

Hey there, Skyaejin. I like the simplicity of the poem, and the way you organized it. It looks very neat with the four four line stanzas. There are some things ...

Hi, Journalist. I appreciate what you're trying to do, and I think it's an interesting thought. I have seen nursery rhymes turned into other things before, but I've never seen ...

Hi, Wolfie! This is a pretty decent poem. I appreciate all the images you provide in the poem; it really illustrates what you feel. I think, however, that there are ...