Morrigan

Wow, this is pretty! I really like your use of imagery and that you have an obvious time progression here. Nice. There are a few suggestions I'd like to make ...

Hi! Okay, so I know this wasn't supposed to be cute, but it was. I loved the last line. It was delightful. I can just see someone staring at that ...

Hello! This is lovely. I don't know if we should quite classify it as poetry: it is more of a description than anything else. Let me help you turn it ...

Hi! I don't think this should be in the Article/Essay section. I think it should probably go in the Poetry section. So I'll review it as if I was reviewing ...

Hello, young master Raven! This is lovely. It's a nice descriptive poem that really gives me an image in my head and has a nice play in the vocabulary as ...

Hi there. Let me tell you something. I don't mean to be rude or mean, but you should not be glorifying cutting. Before you tell me that you're not, let ...

Oh my God, you're brilliant. This is brilliant. You're a genius and I salute you. I love all your asides in the parentheses; they make more of the story than ...

Hey, defying. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Honestly, I had trouble getting through it. It didn't hold my interest, especially through the middle part. It ...

Ahoy there, Lily. I feel like many people can connect to the idea presented in this piece. I myself have fallen victim to distractions. Here is my honest opinion. It's ...

Ahoy there, Em. I like the idea of this, with the two young people inhabiting a place that they used to, but are too old for, but not quite old ...

Hey there, you. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This poem is acting like it's presenting new ideas. It's not. It's presenting an idea that has ...

Hi there, Rain! I liked this. It's simple, but it conveys your point very well. Your use of imagery really spices things up, too. The things that I'm going to ...

Hello, Breshae. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Is this from the perspective of someone already dead? from the first lines, it seems so. Using "would" ...

Hi there, Rydia! This poem is lovely. I hate villanelles, usually, but this one is very well done and is worthy of praise. I appreciate your use of iambic pentameter, ...

Ahoy there, tacimaci! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I understand your love of the theatre, and I'm sure many others do as well. The issue ...