Morrigan

Hello, Subtle, here to review for the thingamajig! All right, so my first thought about this is a big question. What are bubble dreams? I feel like bubble dreams can ...

Hello, puppy! Nice use of slant rhyme between "middle/Hell." Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Honestly, this poem was so preachy that it was a bit ...

Hello, dogsrule5! I see that this is your first poem! I'm impressed that you had the courage to post your very first poem on YWS (if I posted my very ...

Hello, penprincess! First of all, I really like this. Your imagery is fabulous, and it's such a simple wish at the end-- It's just lovely. That being said, there are ...

Hello, Benghazi! I'm here to review your intimidatingly good poem! First of all, I really like this. It's amazing how you are able to create such fabulous imagery and also ...

Hello, Ivy! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. So I think this poem is about a girl who died that the narrator didn't know, but I'm ...

Hello, lovely Moo! You're so gosh darn good at poeting. I just look at your stuff and think to myself, "Dang, gurl, dat gurl is a great poeter." I love ...

Hey there, JayeCShore! So obviously, this is a religious poem. I didn't really understand that it was until the last stanza, but yep. This is a religious poem. Here is ...

Hey, Wey! This line is great: hanging on to promises thinner than a headphone cord I love it so much. It's definitely my favorite part of the poem. Now, let's ...

Hello, Fizz! I really like the pictures you're painting here. I love the thought of sitting on top of a cloud and just looking over everything. There are some things, ...

Lumi, babe! All right, so I saw this before, and I've come back to review, as requested. ^_^ I love it, first of all. It's so full of stuff, like ...

Wow, Spark, this is fab! I got shivers near the end-- your imagery is really nice, and I like how everything comes together at the end. Gosh, it's just, great! ...

Hello, tgirly! It's nice to meet you! I really enjoyed this piece. I wasn't expecting such quality from it, judging by the title, but it's really a well thought out ...

Hello, disco child! I think this is one of the best poems I've seen from you. I love that the feeling is genuine and in the moment. It's really what ...

Hello, Monsters! I seem to remember you posting this work before, but then I looked back and realized that this is the third draft you've posted. Good job for editing! ...