Morrigan

Hi, Adri! First of all, I'm a little confused-- is this written by a character you've made up, or by you? Or by a friend? Also, the date is in ...

Hi there Dr. Feelgood. I'm not too sure what to think about this, actually. It's not categorized under humor, but it seems kind of funny to me. It's so positive ...

Hi! This was really quite lovely. I appreciate that you chose to react creatively to your teacher's sexist views. Creativity in reaction to bigotry often leads to art. And really, ...

This is cute. Honestly, though, I kind of hate that the narrator calls this girl his tomato. First of all, I, too, am of the blushing variety, and it irks ...

Strange, The issue I have with this is that it doesn't really speak to anything. It is a narration, yes, but what is it supposed to point to? It's gruesome, ...

Hello. To me, this is too simple. It doesn't go anywhere, just stays in a depressing, navel-gazing slump that doesn't say anything new about the state of depression. I don't ...

Hello! This was cute. It is supposed to be a humorous poem, and I appreciate your nice little couplet rhyme scheme. It added to the humor. I can really relate ...

Hello. I understand how you feel, as I have had a friend move away, too. Your poem, however, didn't really get me thinking about these friends that have moved away, ...

Hello! I like how you put words together, the images they create and the aura they give off. That being said, I have a few suggestions that would make this ...

Hello again! I agree with the sentiment here, but there are some issues with the execution. First of all, let's talk about ellipses. They're used in modern times to signal ...

I really quite liked this. It shows the futility of waiting around for something to happen. The bit about the baby dying was a bit morbid, but it certainly gets ...

Hi there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I don't feel like this poem is really doing anything for me. It doesn't go anywhere, or describe ...

Hello, inkwell! I don't know how you came up with this or how you're the same age as me because this is lovely and brilliant and makes me jealous that ...

Hello, Asmith! I can really feel the honesty and openness in this poem. It's a love poem, but also a surrender. The thing that's holding this poem back is wordiness ...

Hi there, TheBlackSheep. The subject of the poem is very serious, and I enjoy the almost guilt that the narrator feels when she envied her sister's race, as well as ...