Morrigan

Hi there, Lau! Here to review. While your thoughts are nice, I'm not sure exactly where you were going with this. It's not personal enough to be a personal essay, ...

I'm back to leave a hearty review, as promised. I don't think that you really hit the mark with what you were trying to say. If you're saying that people ...

Hello, Widders! Thanks for reminding me

Hello, JeffRWoodridge! Welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed this. It's not often that you find fantasy poetry anymore. This reminds me a little bit of the work of Shel Silverstein, ...

Hello, myjaspercat~ I understand that this poem might have come from a place that was not exactly inspired. But it is written, and I applaud you for getting it out ...

Hi Lumibear! I'm back to review! Usually, I do a pretty in depth review, but I'm just going to write down some things that I noticed about it. Your language ...

Hello, Skydreamer. Figured I'd leave you a rockin' review to get you out of the green room. Today I'll be talking about not only the text of your poem, but ...

Hello! This has made it in and out of the spotlight so many times. I figured I should finally stop by and leave a comment. This reminds me of dadaism, ...

Hello, Captain. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I read on your wall that this isn't based off of true events and I'm grateful for that. ...

Hello, GreenTulip. I live in Nebraska, too! I agree, it is quite beautiful, isn't it? To be honest, this seemed a lot more like prose broken up to look like ...

Hello! I can really relate to this poem. I have felt the same way, turning a mistake I've made over and over in my mind. Sometimes, when I think about ...

Hello! The title is what drew me to this. I've been back and forth across Iowa quite a few times. But I've never stopped there. I do live just over ...

Hello! Having just reviewed Widdershins' hand poem, I decided to check out your viewings of lips. I really liked some of your descriptions that you use, especially when they're not ...

Hello! Is this a Star Wars reference? If so, you need some more clues that it is. To be honest, I'm not really picking up what you're putting down. It's ...

Hello! I like the energy in this poem, and I suppose that is the point of it. It is very lively! That being said, I'd like to address a few ...