Hello Tuesday here for a review. i like to begin that this poem is descriptive since i can imagine most of the uses for a lip in this poem since the reader could imagine (imagery if you want to see here) also how you used some uses of the lip as a metaphorical term for something else which is spot on for anyone who chooses to write like that. Also i enjoyed that there are snippets of poetry and some could be the beginning of a short story or could theme for something. Plus I enjoyed the ways you describe what one lip can go through, without even moving (besides talking).
Most poems that i read, there are nitpicks or mistakes that would need to be fixed (or mostly due to the fact, that they take in the reviewers thought on how to change whatever they must change within their poem) however, this poem and the reviews i have seen, i would say that you have fixed anything that would need to be fixed. there are many ways of using a lip or a mouth, and they go through so much without anyone to realize it and i find it awesome that you wrote these ways in a poem like form.
Overall, from what i have said, i would say that this is a well-written poem and the imagery within this poem is breathtaking since someone could imagine what you have wrote or could use these ideas your wrote and put them into a story that someone could read.
Farewell,
Tuesday
Points: 6130
Reviews: 257
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