Morrigan

Hello, Scratch! So I'll begin in a way that is unusual for me. Everything in niteowl's review is completely true, and I heartily endorse that review. Thank goodness I read ...

What is love? I'm not sure how this statement connects to the rest of your thing. You go on to talk about the bible and how it relates to judgement, ...

Before you start posting this stuff, I suggest you do some looking at society before you say, "oh, poor straight people! Save us from the evil GAYS!" Poetically, I won't ...

Hello, wisegirl22. I can tell that this came from a place of very strong emotion. Obviously, it's filled with negative emotions towards someone. But who that is, I don't know. ...

Hello, Bambi. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Horror poetry is so hard to pull off. You have to balance between what is real and what ...

Hi there, Fort! I'm in love with the imagery you've got going on in this poem. The way you put words together is magnificent here. That being said, lets get ...

Hello, CapitalMonday. Okay so I love the title. I love the idea that something itchy and abrasive can make someone think of someone. Perhaps the person is itchy and abrasive, ...

You already have a bunch of terrific reviews and thoughts about this poem, but I liked it quite a bit, so I will add my voice to the masses. Okay, ...

Hey, summergrl13. I think it's an interesting story. And I totally dug it. For the first two stanzas. After that, the poetry devolved into prose, and I don't think it ...

Hello, RavenSydeny. I am glad that your friend got out of the situation that she was in, and I hope that she is able to recover from the trauma. This ...

Hello, Verser. Being inspired by a poem is one thing, and scrambling the words around and calling it original is another. I see that you have taken great inspiration from ...

Hello, Unconsoled. So I really, really want to like this. And I don't want to be like the other reviewers and say that I was confused because most of the ...

Hello, Jadefox. To be honest, I don't know if I like this. It's awfully accusatory, and I haven't done anything wrong. That's the thing about second person. You can accuse ...

Hey there, wannabe~ This is sweet. You obviously have potential, though. I enjoyed when you used metaphor and I think you can both trim it back and go farther with ...

Hello, Firepower13! I'm not quite sure I understand this. The general idea, I understand. The narrator wants this other person to stay and ends up hurting/killing them so that they ...