MoonLitTragedy

I love this poem. The message of it stands out well and is perfectly conveyed. The only issue I found is some punctuation and capitalization is inconsistent. While poetry does ...

Hello, Twenty One Pilots fan here! I have a few suggestions, but they aren't necessarily things you have to change, just things I would change if I were to edit. ...

First off, I really enjoyed reading this. The word choice used is good, and the central topic is consistent. The only thing I would change is that punctuation is missing ...

To start, I haven’t seen a poem with this exact central idea, so that adds to my appreciation for this poem. The grammar and spelling in this work is correct ...

To start, I love the rhyme scheme that you used. I like how it varied each stanza, yet followed a similar pattern and included slant rhymes. At the end, though, ...

I love this. From the first stanza, your imagery is amazing and a mood is set well. I like how you used words synonymous to others instead of simple words. ...

I love this poem. I like how each stanza starts out with a bold line, that helps set the poem and stanza. I like the figurative language used throughout the ...

This poem gave me chills. I loved it as soon as I finished the first stanza. There isn’t much imagery, but that doesn’t take too much away from the story. ...

I enjoyed this poem. Something I noticed was that a couple of the rhymes seemed a bit forced. I like the descriptive wording used in this poem. A suggestion: try ...

I opened this poem, because the dragon-shaped poem you wrote was amazing, and I was interested in seeing this one. I love the description in this. Description and imagery seem ...

Oh my gosh. When I first loaded the poem, the words didn’t appear at first. When they loaded, I had to stop. The shape is amazing. I love the description ...

I’m going to go stanza by stanza, so I can try to touch on everything. In the first stanza, I already love the poem. I like how you have roman ...

This is an excellent piece. I think most of the emotions you tried to convey were adequately expressed, and the spelling/grammar was correct as far as I could tell. Something ...

Hi there. Something I noticed that could be fixed or changed is that two lines in the first stanza end in “memories,” which is a bit inconsistent with the rest ...

Wow. This is amazing. I feel like this sort of relates to societal discrimination that currently exists in the LGBT+ community. I love how you compared certain people to the ...