Wow. This is amazing. I feel like this sort of relates to societal discrimination that currently exists in the LGBT+ community. I love how you compared certain people to the colour red, and others to blue. The way you fixated on how it was viewed as wrong, if you will, for certain colours to love their same colour added to the poem. I also love the part where she, the other blue, had wanted to become a red. Also, I feel like the end conveyed sort of a relief that they were considered "normal." This poem genuinely made me feel something, and I love it. Great job.
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