MoonIris

Hi Buranko, I'm here with a review. As @Lezuli said, your poem is hilarious. It's a nice story of a proud chicken that is also very tasty. I found two ...

Hi CreativeUsername, I'm here with a review. I think your short story is written very poetically and the center of attention is the feelings of the main character. I liked ...

Hi MeherazulAzim16, I’m here with a review. I thought this is a great poem and decided to review it. I like your idea as well as why they aren’t dragons ...

Hi Buranko, I’m here with a review. This is a lovely poem as I love the rain as well. The story is nice and in my opinion, the pressure of ...

Hi HarryHardy, I’m here with a review. I like your poem as it’s pretty funny but there isn’t much of a melody to it. I know you probably didn’t want ...

Hi IamI, I'm here with a review. Let's start with the first poem. What I liked was your use of punctuation. I couldn't find a melody to it. I believe ...

Hi Horisun, I'm here with a review. It's an interesting prologue and I'm curious to know where this is going. It tells us what the story is about in an ...

Hi courageousfish I'm here with a review. Your title caught my eye. What I liked about your poem was the message that it had. Life can pass by like a ...

Hi Horisun, I'm here with a review. As soon as I read this it made me think about story written by Freud. The main character just like Merlin looked all ...

Hi Liminality, I'm here with a review. I really like your poem. It feels calm and pictures well the feeling of wanting to be at sea when you are far ...

Hi LadyGemstone, I'm here with a review. I think the concept of the poem is interesting but I also believe that it's confusing. So in the first four lines, we ...

Hi LadyGemstone, I'm here to review another one of your poems. I like the title that you chose for this poem as much as the idea of it. As Stringbean ...

Hi LadyGemstone, it's me again with another review. :) This poem made me feel very calm and from the description, I felt like a little part of me traveled into ...

Hi LadyGemstone, I'm here with a review. Just as with your last poems I like it. I must say that after reading the title I was expecting something else. Push ...

Hi LadyGemstone, I'm here with a review. This poem is quite short and so will be my review. You have another great idea with a lovely message. But as I ...