Young Writers Society

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem. I like the length of the last stanza compared to the rest; the longevity of it adds to the poem, in my opinion.
I love the message the poem sends as well, and I found it to be meaningful and inspiring. The message to enjoy life, and I always love an inspiring positive poem.
I especially am a fan of the line

that's life.

Hey! Review time!

First off, I think the point this poem makes of life being a blur, is amazing and really well done. The poem itself is fantastic, and the wording is great.

The only thing I thought you should add, is capitals at the start of the sentences.

Other than that, I really enjoyed it and think it's cool piece of writing!

Hope you're having a good day,

- Sliver_Lining

Hi courageousfish
I'm here with a review. Your title caught my eye. What I liked about your poem was the message that it had. Life can pass by like a blur. I also appreciated you using punctuation; it made it more pleasant to read. My favorite line was:
"yesterday just went by like a blur"

Now, there are some cons as well. First of all, you start as a poem but you don't finish it that way. I don't know if it was an accident but I think you should keep only one. As well if the second one is in prose and not lyrical you should capitalize.
"and before you know it, it's the next morning"
Here the two its are next to each other and sound like an unpleasant repetition. Removing one of them or adding a full stop should be enough.

Overall you have a great poem you just need to fix one or two things to make it amazing.
I hope my review helped you and didn't offend you in any way,
MoonIris.