Hi Buranko,
I'm here with a review. As @Lezuli said, your poem is hilarious. It's a nice story of a proud chicken that is also very tasty.
I found two little mistakes.
"All the female chickens histerically yelled"
I believe it should be hysterically.
"Now he is the tastiest !"
Here, you don't need the space between tastiest and the exclamation mark. I also love this ending.
This is a great short poem.
I hope my review helped you and didn't offend you in any way,
MoonIris.
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