MooCowPoop

Hi, santana itsMooCowPoop Theres not much for me to review here. Wow, such appreciation for your dog makes me happy. How sweet of a poem. It would be nice if ...

Hello! Interesting points you bring up. How come Christians celebrate Christmas even though it isnt one of the Holy Days? I have wondered that myself. I liked this essay because ...

Very nice story @EscapeToNeverland! I have to tell you something; I'm a sucker for short stories, especially the ones that are extremely short yet extrememly descriptive, and you did a ...

YOU WROTE THIS IN FIVE MINUTES?! However much time it took to write this, I don't care because it was great! It was very quick but you gave so much ...

Hello! Wow, this is a very nicely written and touching story. The end was so sad yet touching to me that I teared up a bit. I especially liked your ...

Hey @KnightTeen! This was really good! I liked the flow and although this was a short story, I didn't feel like the pace was too fast. Couple of questions though: ...

Nice topic! I agree that there are many reasons why the Civil War happened. I think that there needs to be more structure to this essay. There are an abundant ...

Hello! I like this piece. It was very descriptive and it reminds me a lot of when I used to live in SF. I could really feel myself being back ...

Wow, that was a bit more intense than I thought it would be. Before critiquing, I shall applaud you for your story. You did a great job! It was very ...

Wow! This was pretty good! I am happy to see a story about the Witch trials because I just read Arthur Miller's The Crucible in class and we learned a ...

This is very short, but I like it! Meh, me, again being a hypocrite. Anyway, um, I really like this poem. This makes think of when I was questioning what ...

Haha, this was funny, and for some reason, it's rare that I find funny things on YWS (I do not think that I have been looking in the right places ...

This is a good essay. But I am little confused. Can you post the prompt? Suggestion: You might want to lay off speaking in second person P.O.V. (point-of-view) since this ...

Hello! MooCowPoop for a review here! I'm only going to review the first paragraph: Grammar: I'm not going to talk about this for too long but the first sentence needs ...

This was interesting, however, I think that you should add some more description to these events so that we know this character a little better. Sure we know that she ...