Mizzle

Hey, Moksha. Nice to meet you. I'm Mizzle, and welcome to YWS. You should take some time to go introduce yourself in the Welcome Area. Anyways. Kayla's quite right, Moksha, ...

Jame, hey, there. I love this poem, actually, a whole lot. So, yeah. Nice work. Probably one of the best works I've reviewed so far today...:D Cliche, but pulled off ...

I honestly and absolutely agree with what Ben and Dreamy pointed out. They're awesome critics, and they did a great job pointing out what you need to change. My friend...punctuation. ...

Hey, Confused. So, you have a lot of reviews, however, I'd like to say I liked this a fair amount. I adored this part: "Broken is how I stand, Lost ...

Hey there, Ahms. I really didn't like this, and I'm sorry about that. I understand you tried to make it funny, but I just flat out didn't like it. The ...

Hey, Juggualette! Welcome to YWS! Er. Your very wierd. Quite. You talk about love, etc. etc...but then you say it isn't meant to be. ^^ I agree with Snoink. This ...

So, hi there. :D Like Ben, that over-the-top-reviewer-dude, said...I really love your pattern of: "I'm dreaming... where... where... and..." It's beautiful, really and honestly, and quite unique. Poet

Oooh. I liked this, actually, a lot. The senses you used, very nice. Like Snoinkers said, I'd consider varying the structure. I think stanzas would work well, instead of just ...

Hi, there ^^ So, I think you portrayed the legend pretty nicely. However, what annoyed me is you rhymed inconsistently. There was no rhyming pattern, it just skipped on and ...

One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of sharp pointy cliffs and icy cold harbors, a mysterious figure, wearing a cape covering its entire body, which was very ...

Oooh, hey there, Tiff. I loved your poem. Really, I did. Adored it. Anyhoo, like Classy said, that ^ line ruins your beautiful river-flow poem. This was a very well ...

Hey. So, I basically think everyone's covered it, but I did like this. Some lines just didn't fit. The ones they mentioned up there especially ^^. Tears on a paper ...

Okay, so I really like Tiff's (^^OverEasy) idea. That much repetition gets annoying, so cut it down like she suggested. She's also right again though--this has all been used. All ...

Hey, Timmy. Hope you're having a nice day. Okay, so what I liked about this: 1. It's classic, very nice subject. 2. I love the stanza NO. 2. It's my ...

Hi there. I quite like this, actually. A lot. I loved it. :D I loved most of your stanzas and lines, however the first and fourth stanza were a little ...