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Re: More Than What It Seems Chapter 3
Hey Pancake! This was a great chapter by the way! :D Plot: well, there wasn't much plot to work with or anything to nitpick here, but the fact that you ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: skipping tracks
Hey, Savvy, the name's MissLyricz and I'm happy to review your poem today! Happy Review Day by the way! (Lol that rhymes!) First of all, I must say that before ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Heartlines
Hey there, wridingislife! I saw chapter 4 of your story in the Green Room and I found the title to be very interesting, so I decided to start reading chapter ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Two Roads
Hey, myjaspercat! :D I rather enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. I liked how you gave a particular amount of detail and description, which added to the whole curiosity of ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: Dear Parents
Hey artybirdy! Well, your poem was a most interesting read, nonetheless. It was suitable to the genre you have given it as it did come across as highly realistic and ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 24 *
Hey tigeraye, another wonderfully written chapter, my friend- awesome! Plot: the plot of this chapter was interesting and some of the events were not quite what was expected, which was ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: When Is It A Joy To Be Sad?
Hey TheSilverFox! :D I have to admit, your poem was a very odd and perplexing read but it was rather interesting to a great extent! You certainly have an interesting ...
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: We Teach Our Children
Hey there, aouther2b! :D I personally found that your poem was rather good, you should be proud of this writing piece, my friend! There was a lot of feeling and ...
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 1.1
Hey Jericho! I found your story to be very interesting to say the least, you had a very particular way of writing the story, which initially drew me into the ...
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: Death's Last Dance
Wow! This was a very well written and well constructed poem, Sarah12! I loved the flow between each of the verses or stanzas, whatever form you wish to refer them ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 23 *
Hey tigeraye! Your faithful and anticipated reader is here for another review! This chapter was interesting, as was expected, as you always manage to keep things interesting- it's one of ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Hallucinations
Very interesting sequel to "Dear Special Someone", though the ending was rather disappointing, I was hoping for it to end happily. Aw shame! I liked how you kept repeating "they're ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Dear Special Someone,
Hey there! :D Well, I must say, I liked the style of your poem, the words and the way the words flowed together. I also found the first two lines ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: The Things I Keep Inside
This one was certainly intensely personal, you're very brave to have the courage to share this with people and I commend you for that. :D The way you wrote this ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: He Called Me Beautiful
Hey, Gravity! :D I rather enjoyed reading this poem. It was mildly intense and based on the flow of the poem, it almost felt as though it was personal, which ...
Nov 23, 2015
