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MissLyricz

Inside A Lyrical Mind

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: More Than What It Seems Chapter 3

    Hey Pancake! This was a great chapter by the way! :D Plot: well, there wasn't much plot to work with or anything to nitpick here, but the fact that you ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: skipping tracks

    Hey, Savvy, the name's MissLyricz and I'm happy to review your poem today! Happy Review Day by the way! (Lol that rhymes!) First of all, I must say that before ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Heartlines

    Hey there, wridingislife! I saw chapter 4 of your story in the Green Room and I found the title to be very interesting, so I decided to start reading chapter ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Two Roads

    Hey, myjaspercat! :D I rather enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. I liked how you gave a particular amount of detail and description, which added to the whole curiosity of ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Parents

    Hey artybirdy! Well, your poem was a most interesting read, nonetheless. It was suitable to the genre you have given it as it did come across as highly realistic and ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 24 *

    Hey tigeraye, another wonderfully written chapter, my friend- awesome! Plot: the plot of this chapter was interesting and some of the events were not quite what was expected, which was ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When Is It A Joy To Be Sad?

    Hey TheSilverFox! :D I have to admit, your poem was a very odd and perplexing read but it was rather interesting to a great extent! You certainly have an interesting ...

    Nov 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: We Teach Our Children

    Hey there, aouther2b! :D I personally found that your poem was rather good, you should be proud of this writing piece, my friend! There was a lot of feeling and ...

    Nov 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: In the Absence of Stars - 1.1

    Hey Jericho! I found your story to be very interesting to say the least, you had a very particular way of writing the story, which initially drew me into the ...

    Nov 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Death's Last Dance

    Wow! This was a very well written and well constructed poem, Sarah12! I loved the flow between each of the verses or stanzas, whatever form you wish to refer them ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 23 *

    Hey tigeraye! Your faithful and anticipated reader is here for another review! This chapter was interesting, as was expected, as you always manage to keep things interesting- it's one of ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hallucinations

    Very interesting sequel to "Dear Special Someone", though the ending was rather disappointing, I was hoping for it to end happily. Aw shame! I liked how you kept repeating "they're ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Dear Special Someone,

    Hey there! :D Well, I must say, I liked the style of your poem, the words and the way the words flowed together. I also found the first two lines ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Things I Keep Inside

    This one was certainly intensely personal, you're very brave to have the courage to share this with people and I commend you for that. :D The way you wrote this ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: He Called Me Beautiful

    Hey, Gravity! :D I rather enjoyed reading this poem. It was mildly intense and based on the flow of the poem, it almost felt as though it was personal, which ...

    Nov 23, 2015


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