Midnightmoon

Hello! First off, I really only noticed one thing that is a little awkward to read. The line; "In my teen age I never tried to be anyone's beloved." The ...

Hi there! So, just a few things I noticed and have a few suggestions about. Lets get started! So first of all, the second line, I would change 'Hear' to ...

I like how this poem is so serious. The sadness really hits the reader. I like it! In this verse: "And every other place emptied by exile" I would put ...

Hello! I didn't notice anything that isn't already in the review below. :). So I'll just tell you how much I like it. :D. It's a really deep poem, and ...

Amazing poem! I love the truth in it! I have nothing to say, It's a good poem, grammar is good, format is good, and everything else! "I pretend that I ...

Hello, I love this poem! I just have a few suggestions to make. First off, on this line; "Thou art the prince of heavenly sky Studded with pearls of stars." ...

Great poem! I have no suggestions to make, it's a perfect poem! Such emotion in it too. Which is a great thing to have in a poem. "You wrote the ...

It's a good poem, just a few suggestions. "the earth beneath her so distant." I would maybe put "very distant." I think it makes it flow a little easier. "She ...

It's a good poem. I have only a few suggestions, and it's mostly just putting in a few small words to make it flow a little easier. On this line; ...

I don't have much to say, just a few things to maybe fix. First off, "For burnt ashes can't be made fire twice" I don't know if that was on ...

It's a very good poem. I have only one suggestion to make. "Your time is done in this play." I would maybe say, " Your time is done." or "Your ...

I honestly have no corrections to make. Just to say that it's a very...free...gentle poem. I hope that makes sense. :D. It's very nice. "So even while I realize That ...

"Oh my gosh" That is what I said when I finished reading this beautiful poem. It is strong! All the verses just leap out at you! I honestly have no ...

I like how you put this poem to where it means different things to different readers. Again, the simplicity of this poem is what makes it stronger. What I love ...

Very strong poem! It's plain and simple, which makes it all the stronger. The typo of ugly might want to be fixed :). I like how in each and every ...