Midnightmoon

Hi there! Midnight here for a review. First off, I don't know much about Fanfic, but I'll do my best. Second, All I really noticed was some typing errors. Sorry, ...

Hi there! Midnight here for a review. So, I'll jump right into this, as I noticed a lot that could be fixed, though overall it's a pretty neat story. It's ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. I think I'll jump right in here, and I'm sorry if it's a little harsh. So first off, a ...

Amazing! Totally understandable. I know this is probably a typo, but there should be a space between "Suddenly" and "I". :). On this one line; "...Stop to see a tree." ...

Hello. Gorgeous poem. I totally understand what you are saying in this poem, and how you feel. I don't have anything really to point out, I love the way the ...

Hi there! Midnight here again for a review. I'll break this down, and in the process or at the end I'll try to answer your questions. I'm going to jump ...

Amazing poem! I love how you did that. I really don't have much to say. "With strangers of a drunken lore." That is my favorite line. Maybe because it reminds ...

Hi there! So I'll break this down, and I'll go through what I found confusing, then a few grammar improvements you could make, and then what I liked about this ...

Good poem! Just a question, are the events out of order for a reason? Like is that part of the structure, or just how you wanted to write the poem? ...

Really good poem! I loved how you matched the simplicity and feeling. Just a few nitpicks. :) "Maybe then you'll tell me your feeling a few years too slow." I ...

Hi there! So I'll start with what I liked. The story is good, and the writing is good. Just a few errors, but I'll get to those later. :). I ...

Hi there! Okay, first off, Pretty good poem. I like it, short and sweet. I like what the first three lines say. It speaks out. Poetry doesn't have to be ...

Hi there! Okay, first off, amazing poem!! I like the feeling you put into it. I love what you did on this line, "They said “there will be peace” seventy ...

Hi there! Midnightmoon here to review. So first off I really like this chapter, I'm hooked and can't wait till the next one. However, I did notice a few things ...

Hi there! Just a few things that I noticed. First off, this line; "Looking with intent eyes in the direction they longed the most," It's just a little awkward to ...