Hey there! Shey here for a review!
The previous reviewer already covered most things relating to the content of the poem, so I'll review the other part of poetry... Formatting.
This is a very simple piece; the ideas in it aren't particularly complex. It's still a good piece, don't get me wrong, but formatting might be a nice way to spice it up.
First thing you can do is split the piece into stanzas. The publishing center makes that extremely difficult, but there's a simple trick to getting splits. Put <p> before each stanza, and </p> after. Do this repeatedly, on each of the stanzas. Then, after every line do </br>. This should make the coding split it into stanzas.
Another thing you can try is having some indents and white space in effect here. It goes a long way when you align some text to the right, or center certain parts. Doing so accents the line, and so when readers read it, they naturally put emphasis on it. For example, aligning the last line of this piece to the right would probably work very well. However, it's all up to you.
Overall, great piece! I look forward to seeing more from you! Keep up the great work!
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