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Here I am...I looked at what your most recent work was and I believe it was this. Let's get to it Shall we? I love how you made the environment ...

Hi there, This was a good story with a good twist - or should I say: 'touch' - at the end. I only have two remarks though. How in the ...

Hi there, I have to admit that this is better than most longer short stories I read so far. I don't know if you expect a full review, but there ...

Hi there, Firstly I have to apologize, I promised I would review everything in the short story, horror category and look at how far I'm behind already! But hey, I'm ...

Hey there, Bravo. This sure is a good horror story. I like the way you portrait your characters, especially the way you write from the killers' point of view. It ...

Hey there, before reading I noticed that this short piece is just one piece of text. Especially on this site it's important to space your text out in paragraphs to ...

So here I am, Your story is quite solid, short and light even for a subject like this. I like how it just skips from one part to the next. ...

Hey there, To be honest I wasn't really drawn to the story as much as I would have liked to. There can be a couple of reasons for that: - ...

This is most probably the best short story I've read this week and I have the feeling it'll be the best one I'll read here in a while. I really ...

Hey there, This sure was an interesting story. I like how you create the mystery, by telling the reader the right things at the right time. Kudos on that. Another ...

Hey I'm working through the short story - horror section of the site and eventually I had to stumble on this one, so here I am. You sure have an ...

I agree with Sionarama's review on most parts, though I've got some things to add to that Telling your dog to lick you when a killer is in the street ...

To be honest I've never heard or read this story before. Re-telling a story is dangerous though. You have to stick with the original ideas of the story while giving ...

Hey again, The ending was good and a promising one too. I mean all the small chapters were not much longer than one stanza and the last one was quite ...

Hey there, You've certainly got a good story going on here. Especially the diary-feeling that you've laid out here is a way of taking a classic horror genre you don't ...