Hey! Forever here with a review!!
First and foremost, a person simply cannot write a story during dying. So, that is a huge contradiction here. When you kill a person in story, it's better to write it in third person. That way, you can describe the feelings of the person and at the same time, there will be logic.
C’mere Sophie
Just a personal opinion but I guess come here sounds better.
Talking about the plot, I definitely wasn't expecting that plot twist. When third time Sophie licked, it already successfully created a lot of terrors among the readers but when we got to know that the murderer was the actual person, I was actually quite surprised and shocked. I didn't even think of it.
I wonder a bit about it. When did the murderer actually come and when did the murderer start licking the person? The first lick actually seems to belong to the dog, Sophie. I wonder from the second lick. Maybe from the second lick, the murderer started licking. Again it made me wonder about something else. Since when is the murderer there? Since the time when the MC was telling Sophie? Perhaps or otherwise it's highly unlikely for him to know.
How did the murderer kill Sophie? Dogs are kind of very sensitive animals. And just next to Sophie was the alert MC. So, it's a very hard thing to remove Sophie from there and kill it. I still wonder how it happened.
Now the last and the most important questions. Why did the murderer kill the MC? Like murderers do not kill people without any reason. They generally have malice or some grudge against the victim. I am not at all sure but I guess you were referring to a serial killer rather than a murderer. Overall, it was a great story.
Keep Writing!!
~Forever
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