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When I write, I am in control, but at the same time I am free to let the stories fall past on their own adventures. True, true, true. Writing can ...

Usually I put one section of the poem that i like most. This one just has too many. I would have to put the whole poem on my review to ...

Ah, how more perfectly true can a poem about writing poems get. I've felt this way before. poem writing can be hard. I'll have times when I want to write ...

This is another excellent poem. It's an interesting view. A very well written free-verse poem. I like that you show that it is God who is the decider, that he ...

This format is PERFECT for this poem. I love how you expressed the boy's thoughts. They are so like how it would b if this were a real meeting. And ...

WOW! Man can you write good! This is amazing! Your description, your imagery, your imagination, your description, is SO good. We imagine evil spirits pursuing us, and we engage them ...

WOW! WOW WOW WOW! What a powerful poem! I man really good. It shows the insides of some of us, and how we really are, but also it shows how ...

So this is such a short poem, yet more packed with truth then some 10+ lines. It's a hopeful poem, and I loved it. At first I read it and ...

This is a big jump from the previous chapter, but that makes me want to read more. IT seems that Tully has grown older by a couple years. I'm pretty ...

England. A country filled with peace and warmth. "Tully, please come and help with unpacking the boxes, your dad and I can't just do everything, you know." My mum called ...

This is an interesting prologue that quickly gets the reader into the story, and feeling for the main character (MC). It seems like just when she gets settled a little ...

Just from the reviews I've sen this looked like a really good chapter, and I was wasn't disappointed. I like the conversation between Aria and Derin, but it seems like ...

This was just another great chapter, Sushi! The Gardilla are pretty creepy, and a perfect fit for the story. I feel bad for Aria and Derin, and feel AAAAARGH!!! at ...

OK, so I was into the fight, it was adrenaline-rushing, Derin started fighting, and there was a sad moment as the other raiders began to go down. Then Aria appeared ...

This is a great follow-up to your prologue. This story seems pretty interesting, but i have a few problems with it. 1. Why, if Aria is feeling so bad, is ...