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Hey, here to review. So this poem is really nice. I love the way describe all the things the wind can be seen doing. Like the part about blowing the ...

Alright! glad to be back to this story. glad that we at least know what gender this character is. :) This just adds more to the question list. Who is ...

I'll go through in order like the prologue. It was a normal day in the palace. It still sat atop the mountain foreboding and full of doom. Just like its ...

I just listed things as I saw them, and then put summary at the end. The three of them watched the smoke as if wafted up into the air, when ...

you look back on any remember. should be and, not any. I'm glad you wrote this. I was wanting to write something about 9/11, but I just didn't know what. ...

Malachi here to review on one of the best short stories I've ever read. What can I say? Your accuracy and precision in explaining every little detail is so awesome. ...

So this is such a short poem, yet more packed with truth then some 10+ lines. It's a hopeful poem, and I loved it. At first I read it and ...

Hahahahahha. This story is so random and strange that it's very funny. I laughed especially when he asked the teacher what the question meant. Her response and his thoughts were ...

This was a pretty good poem. I like how you come back to the phrase : Past the clouds that gather in herds, To the beautiful setting sun. That's a ...

I couldn't go more than a few sentences. I'm sorry but this just doesn't make sense. It'd totally wrong. No one, NO ONE, instantly decides to kidnap some random kids ...

Here are a few of your sentences, re-done wit the correct punctuation. I swinted at him I squinted at him. "Yea" I remarked "Yeah!" I remarked, "It is!" collage!" college!" ...

There is one major problem with this story. You MUST have spaces between dialogue lines and other lines. Every time a dialogue line begins it must start on a new ...

Whoa! I was reading the first sentence and BOOM! the perspective changes from third to first person just like that. I would suggest keeping it on one perspective. If you ...

It's hard to find anything wrong with such a flawless piece of art. So my review will just be more of a congratulations for such a well written and well ...

Wow! hahahahaha. This was GREAT! From the beginning I was either smiling or laughing, due to your confusingly predictable (or is it unpredictable due to you trying to be predictable ...