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Re: I am you
ooOOOOOOOOooooOOooOoo I like this. The plot twist thing. I expected it, because I am quite familiar with this concept of treating yourself as another individual when it is, actually, yourself. ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: remember
Somehow this poem gives me a nice, memorable feeling. Which is warm and cute. I like memories, and I like the way you describe one in this piece. I can ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: She Doesn't Know
*Sniff* I SMELL MEMORIES! HI THERE, I'M MEMORYHUNTER FOR A REVIEW ON YOUR POEM. I'll start with the technical stuff first. 1. Rhythm, rhyming scheme It's okay, but in some ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: The real you
Hey, this is MemoryHunter here to review your poem! Okay, I'll try the straightforward stuff but I don't think I can do it. *cough* 1. TECHNICAL THINGIES A. Grammar, Spelling, ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: The End
WOAH WOAH WOAH HI THERE MEMORYHUNTER HERE FOR A QUICK REVIEW~ 1. Technical boring stuff Okay, we'll go through it slowly, despite what I said about this being a quickie. ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Faded
HI THERE HOW ARE YOU IT'S MEMORYHUNTER~ YES, I AM PERFECTLY AWARE OF HOW I DIDN'T PUT PUNCTUATION THERE. Okay. Let me separate this review for a bit because I ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: On The Rocks
oooo Hello, I'm MemoryHunter here to review your short story~ I have to admit, that ending just makes me feel complete somehow. You've got an air of a feature writer. ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: When I was young...
AHAHHAHAHAHAH ...hey there, I'm MemoryHunter. You probably know why I'm here. Okay let's make this review neat and tidy, shall we? I present to you... My article-writing style of things. ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: I've Got A Dream
Hello there! This is MemoryHunter, or avid Panic! At The Disco fan, or cranky Dota 2 player, or... class president... or... whatever~ This'll be a quickie compared to my other ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Terms and Conditions
HELLO THERE! THIS IS MEMORYHUNTER~ So I like the idea you have here with the terms and conditions and things. I love works that focus on friendship because I can ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Seaside Serenity
HELLO THERE AND AGAIN, WELCOME TO YWS! I'm sorry if my review will be a little bit stupid because I've been staring at the computer now for about 10 hours. ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: Think Twice
I don't know why, but it seems that you have gotten so close to poetry that you unconsciously incorporate poetry in your prose. That is awesome o3o! I'm sorry that ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Two
HELLO I am sorry that I'm late. I'm just really good at procrastinating. I didn't mean it, if that's what you thought. ;-; *cough*Imalwaystoobusyplayingdota*cough* So, I didn't review the first ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: I believe
Hello there, looooooong friend. Okay that was awkward. So, I'm back (again) and I figured I could check on how you were doing with your poetry. I admit, if I ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: I Will Wait
HELLO THERE! Forgive me if my review is going to be a little rusty since I haven't reviewed that much nowadays... yeah. This is my sad story. First of all, ...
Apr 18, 2016
