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Hi TGHam! I like the poem. I specially like the subject it touches on. I think the message is that nobody has one specific identity. In fact, all that one ...

Hi Liberty! You're Too Young was just as fun to read. I like how it's a complete story and everything comes full circle. Kayla wants a smartphone; Kayla also wants ...

Hi Liberty! This is a happiness-inducing piece. It was fun to read out. I was wondering if Jill just saw weirdly shaped clouds but oh heck, it's THE FLYING PENGUINS! ...

Hi Piano Girl! It's a fairly objective essay. I didn't know about Bergen-Belsen before. I decided not to google it before reading the essay. Just to see to what extent ...

Hi Interstella! First of all, welcome back to YWS! I loved the poem. I felt this sense of revolution throughout. the soil to rest. Outside the window, we watch trees ...

Hi Anamel! I enjoyed reading this. I've read your poems before. They tend to be interesting and frankly, deep. I'll try to interpret or share my thoughts on some or ...

Hi Liberty! I think I can help cut some more words down. But, remember, these are merely suggestion. Suddenly he was back in the woods... I don't think "suddenly" adds ...

Hi BeeTeaDubs! You said in reply to a previous review that you chose not to use as many punctuation in order to make the poem flow better. I could definitely ...

It's great cause it's true. Makes me think. Just how much character development every kid goes through. And to realize, when the arc is over, they aren't even kids anymore. ...

[SPOILERS AHEAD, JUST IN CASE SOMEBODY CAME DOWN BEFORE FINISHING THE STORY. ] Hi Erilea! Inhale and Fade. It's a powerful story. Alex was, in particular, beautifully written. Probably a ...

Hi there, I like the poem and the ideas it convey. Waves crashing into the shore One after another for all of eternity, Just like a myriad of people Bringing ...

Hi Sound! Oh my god, first of all, you sound so cool. I think I'm giggling right now. I knew it was good when I heard the first line. I ...

Hi there! I should mention I haven't reviewed a poetry in maybe years. So, I might sound a little rusty here. Here we go. I liked reading it. I liked ...

Hi there, The first chapter painted a pretty clear picture of where the character stands. But it was just about Tiffany Brooke and Justin. I feel you've introduced too many ...

Hi there, My laptop only had a couple minutes of battery life left when I picked a random work from the green room. Just a little something to read before ...