Young Writers Society

Your voice is.. wow. I loved listening to it and the lyrics themselves are amazing as well which really ties everything together. 10/10 love it!!

As for the lyrics themselves, I love that you used repetition and had many of the lines start out the same way. I think this is one of the most effective ways of conveying the severity of a particular emotion or mindset; this set of lyrics evoked a feeling of being lost but also hopeful, which I'm not sure is entirely correct but that's how I felt as I read through the different stanzas.

I also like that you vary the length of the stanzas rather than keeping everything uniform, especially in the stanzas towards the end. Variation in structure is something that always catches my eye and it was unexpected in a set of lyrics, so I applaud you for implementing it here.

Lovely job (and lovely voice)!!

your voice is everything

Wow!

I just listened to you singing and it was amazing. Btw, I am kinda jelly. I wish I could sing like you!

Plus your songwriting is also good! I know it's the other way around, but do you have any tips for newbies in songwriting (like me)?

Hope to see more of you!

omg this is amazing! Love the vocals!

Hi Sound!

Oh my god, first of all, you sound so cool. I think I'm giggling right now. I knew it was good when I heard the first line. I love this song. I don't know the character the song is about but I kind of wish now that I did.

I'm listening to some of your other songs now. You're a good songwriter. 'I'm Already Lost' maybe stands out to me.

I honestly got no suggestions here. I like your songwriting style. Point is that I think you have this distinctive style. Which is really really cool.

Just keep on making good music! I wanna hear more!

Excelsior!

~MAS

P.S. i was wondering if you'd ever be interested in colab-ing on writing a song or giving it a shot if someone else wrote a song (if it's any good), *by someone else I mean me*