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Hi there! Thanks for requesting a review. I read through your prologue and first chapter. They were kind of shaky, but this is much better. The first paragraph is, as ...

Hey there! Here to review your work again! This is really pretty. I love poems like these, that seek to capture a small moment in time. Shallow breaths cascade across ...

Aw, this is really sweet. It's something I'd sing to my kid for sure. There's not a lot I have to say here, mostly because it's so short and simple. ...

This is pretty cool. It sounds like someone is shouting at themselves to be better than they are right now and to stop being apathetic. And I really like that ...

Ooh, this is really pretty! Overall, I really like it. There are a few things I want to get out of the way first, though: Whom I will lead through ...

Hi there! Let's get right into it. I admit I have no familiarity with the original work, so bear with me on that. 1. Is your formatting intentional, or is ...

Wow, this is really quite touching. I loved how lyrical it was. You did a good job with rhythm and rhyming. I'm going to mention a couple small things and ...

Hey there! So, I like this poem quite a bit. I love how lighthearted and funny it is. Your title might be a tad misleading, though - when I clicked ...

Here to review as promised. :) To start off, I like idea behind this, it's really very sweet. Stellan is really cute. I looked at the poem this is based ...

Hi there! I really like your poem. It's a fairly used topic, but you make it work pretty well. Your imagery isn't completely unique - you kind of mixed cliches ...

Hello there! This is pretty cool. (I admit to never having read A Song of Ice and Fire, so bear with me on that.) Anyway, on to the review. First ...

Hey there! I'll admit to not quite understanding this, but I really like it. Anyway, on to the review. The first thing I'd recommend is to make and extra space ...

Well this is a pretty cool piece. I love that you show how photographs can capture the essence of family memories. Basically the main think I can think of to ...

I love this, especially the formatting. It flows really well, too. I don't really have any critiques on content, so I'll just make a couple suggestions about flow and stuff. ...

*Applause* Masterfully done! That's really the main thing I have to say about this piece. You did pretty much everything really well. I especially loved how you weaved the tick-tock ...