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Re: (Chapter 1 - A coming of ways)
Hey there and welcome to the site! I thought I'd drop by to review this chapter one today. I liked the dynamic between Kape and Manis in the second scene. ...
Sat Sep 09, 2017 1:24 am -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 5
Hey there! Thought I'd drop by and review this chapter. Firstly, thanks for the summary! That was really helpful since I haven't read the previous chapters. One of the first ...
Sat Sep 09, 2017 1:05 am -
Re: Orange Asiatic Lilies pt. 2
This was so sad and so sweet all at once. :'( I read both parts in one go so I might talk about the first part as well. Overall, my ...
Fri Sep 08, 2017 11:16 am -
Re: Chapter 5.1: Gael
Hi as always. :D I'm torn when it comes to the magical information stuff. On the one hand, I was able to understand it (though I'm really curious as to ...
Fri Sep 08, 2017 10:39 am -
Re: Intuition: Chapter 1.1
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review today. I like that, though this starts out with an amnesiac, he's not waking up in his bed - he's ...
Wed Sep 06, 2017 10:10 pm -
Re: The Realm of Lousy Characters, Intro Part 1
Okay, this is awesome. Seriously. I think you could make it even better, but you might need someone more skilled than me to work out exactly what to edit. But ...
Wed Sep 06, 2017 9:05 am -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 7, The Party (part 1)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Wow, those kids are creepy. Seriously creepy - by which I mean I don't trust them to have ...
Mon Sep 04, 2017 10:01 pm -
Re: Chapter 5- Spotted
Hey there! Thought I'd drop by for a quick review. I enjoyed reading this! Your main character especially was pretty engaging, and I like her dynamic with Marcel. To me, ...
Mon Sep 04, 2017 9:44 pm -
Re: nanamam
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by today and review this. First off, I myself have just started my senior year, and this is definitely relatable. Too many APs, college ...
Mon Sep 04, 2017 8:04 am -
Re: Chapter 4.2: Felaris
And I'm back! So this is interesting! Lots of mystery here. Can't wait to see how all of this intrigue winds up playing out. I'm really glad we were able ...
Sun Sep 03, 2017 10:02 pm -
Re: Chapter 4.1: Felaris
This was a great chapter. The conflict with Felaris was instantly interesting and her past makes her a great character to interact with Ilami here. It brings life to what ...
Sun Sep 03, 2017 10:03 am -
Re: Chapter 3.2: Ilami
This was a pretty decent chapter. It wasn't exceptional, but it wasn't boring or confusing either. It was mostly what's to be expected, in a chapter about starting at a ...
Sun Sep 03, 2017 8:37 am -
Re: I Love You
Hey there! I used to be a huge fan of Warriors, so I couldn't resist clicking on this. This was really sweet. I could really feel the mother's pain of ...
Sun Sep 03, 2017 8:03 am -
Re: FT: ReBirth Act 1, Chapter 2
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review today. Note that I've never really watched anime, so take my advice with a bit of a grain of salt. ...
Sat Sep 02, 2017 9:05 am -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 4 ~ Foot Steps in the Night
Somehow I don't think Zoltar is just being overly paranoid. :P And I really have a feeling that Scorpus isn't comign back. This chapter honestly feels far weaker than the ...
Sat Sep 02, 2017 5:35 am
