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Wow! This was a really interesting and unique idea. I think it could have the potential to be a novel at some point. A few suggestions: so I borrowed my ...

Wow, this was a really deep story! I definitely didn't see the ending coming. It's so sad, though. Now the little girl won't be able to grow up with her ...

Hi there and happy Review Day! I like this story so far. I admit I haven't read the first chapter, but I still understood this. I liked how it was ...

Hi there and happy Review Day! To start out, I think this story has potential, but right now it's not really going anywhere. I didn't feel any sense of closure ...

So. This is definitely a rant. Now, there is a place for rants. Basically, they're good for letting all your feelings out, or a as a way to persuade people ...

Hi there and happy Review Day! To start off, I think this was a good story. It definitely addressed important issues about how nobody takes stuff like this seriously. It ...

All right, let's get some reviews on this lovely piece. I love this. :D It's such a clever idea, and I like the way you transferred YWS into real life. ...

Hello! I'm here get this out of the Green Room for you! To be honest, this needs a lot of work. As @ladcat13 said, the grammar is bad to the ...

I loved this. Absolutely loved this. I started thinking it might be about the Doctor in the third stanza, and was pretty sure by the time "lonely angel" rolled around. ...

Hi there! I really like your story. I really liked the characterization of Kai. He felt just like a child in both his words and his actions. I also liked ...

Hi there! This was an interesting story! I liked the idea and the message. Let's launch into the review. First of all, your story opens with a lovely bit of ...

I really liked this and I actually didn't find it that hard to read. I couldn't figure out some of the longer words, though. For the longer ones, I'd recommend ...

I really, really like everything you're saying here. I totally agree with all of this. Correlation is not causation, and we have no idea what is going through a person's ...

Wow, this was really great. I really liked the part about the "broken, fragmented person inside," followed by the "softening your hard gaze on the lesser people." It so clearly ...

All right, I'm finally here for a review! Sorry it took so long, I've been busy. And I forgot for a while. >_< Anyway. I like it, even if it ...