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Re: stairs don't make sense
Hello man! That was a fun poem! Personally, I don't have the requirements to make grammatical corrections, and outside of that, I really only have things I liked. First of ...
Aug 26, 2020 -
Re: what does this color remind me of
Hello man! It's MaxaM here for a small review. I say small because I really don't have much to comment on when it comes to grammar, that is most of ...
Aug 25, 2020 -
Re: Candles in the Dark
Hello man! I'm MaxaM and I'm here for a quick review! I really don't have much to criticize in the most known and negative sense of the word, so instead, ...
Aug 25, 2020 -
Re: Boring
Hello man! I really related to your poem, even though it's not exactly something good to relate to. As someone who's dealing with depression, sometimes I feel like the sheer ...
Aug 24, 2020 -
Re: Ungifted
Hello man! You got a nice story and it has a lot of potential. There are just a few typos that I identified so I thought about pointing them out ...
Aug 23, 2020 -
Re: A Long Pretentious Title About Skin and Bone (there's something wrong with me)
Hello man! I really liked your poem! I think we've all felt that morbid curiosity about what would happen if we just did that one stupid thing. I found it ...
Aug 21, 2020 -
Re: Next Door
Hello man! It's a nice story you have there, but there are some things i think could be improved. As Lezuli said, there are times throughout the story where you'll ...
Aug 21, 2020 -
Re: The girl from the library V2
Hello man, the overall plot of the chapter was pretty good and interesting and the pacing was into wich things happened was enjoyable, but i think there are some things ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: My Beautiful Boy
Hello person, i really liked your short tale, it was quite a fun read! Your narration was really well done, and i felt like i was able to understand the ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: CHAPTER 1: How It All Began or In Which It All Began
Hello man! That's a nice begining you have there, and your story has a lot of potential, so allow me to try and give some constructive criticism for it to ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: All and More
Hello man! I am quite the new reviewer so please, go easy on me. I am not a very fan of romance, but a apreciate beauty and your poem exerts ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: A Ball of Anger
Hello man! What a coincidence to see you again, lol. I am quite new at reviewing, so please go easy on me. I really like the idea of your poem, ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: Our true colors
Hello person! I am new at reviewing, so please go easy on me. Well, for starters, i really like the idea of having a characters that originally was cis and ...
Aug 20, 2020
