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MaxaM

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: stairs don't make sense

    Hello man! That was a fun poem! Personally, I don't have the requirements to make grammatical corrections, and outside of that, I really only have things I liked. First of ...

    Aug 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: what does this color remind me of

    Hello man! It's MaxaM here for a small review. I say small because I really don't have much to comment on when it comes to grammar, that is most of ...

    Aug 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Candles in the Dark

    Hello man! I'm MaxaM and I'm here for a quick review! I really don't have much to criticize in the most known and negative sense of the word, so instead, ...

    Aug 25, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Boring

    Hello man! I really related to your poem, even though it's not exactly something good to relate to. As someone who's dealing with depression, sometimes I feel like the sheer ...

    Aug 24, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ungifted

    Hello man! You got a nice story and it has a lot of potential. There are just a few typos that I identified so I thought about pointing them out ...

    Aug 23, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Long Pretentious Title About Skin and Bone (there's something wrong with me)

    Hello man! I really liked your poem! I think we've all felt that morbid curiosity about what would happen if we just did that one stupid thing. I found it ...

    Aug 21, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Next Door

    Hello man! It's a nice story you have there, but there are some things i think could be improved. As Lezuli said, there are times throughout the story where you'll ...

    Aug 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The girl from the library V2

    Hello man, the overall plot of the chapter was pretty good and interesting and the pacing was into wich things happened was enjoyable, but i think there are some things ...

    Aug 20, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Beautiful Boy

    Hello person, i really liked your short tale, it was quite a fun read! Your narration was really well done, and i felt like i was able to understand the ...

    Aug 20, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: CHAPTER 1: How It All Began or In Which It All Began

    Hello man! That's a nice begining you have there, and your story has a lot of potential, so allow me to try and give some constructive criticism for it to ...

    Aug 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: All and More

    Hello man! I am quite the new reviewer so please, go easy on me. I am not a very fan of romance, but a apreciate beauty and your poem exerts ...

    Aug 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Ball of Anger

    Hello man! What a coincidence to see you again, lol. I am quite new at reviewing, so please go easy on me. I really like the idea of your poem, ...

    Aug 20, 2020
  • Art » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our true colors

    Hello person! I am new at reviewing, so please go easy on me. Well, for starters, i really like the idea of having a characters that originally was cis and ...

    Aug 20, 2020


The magic is only in what books say, how they stitched the patches of the universe together into one garment for us.
— Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451