Matthews

Well, I looked at the photo meant to inspire the stories/poems, and to me, it seems as if you are basically just TELLING the story behind the photo. Actually, you're ...

Wow, this was thoroughly engrossing. I really got into the story, and you portrayed everything beautifully. It's better written then a lot of published work! Anyway, I agree about the ...

I like the original aspect of this very much! It totally makes it shine, when otherwise this theme would bore me. You need to work on your rhyme scheme, as ...

I don't really like this. It's short and abrupt, (the lines) and seems to be just stating obvious, everyday things. Bo-ring! You used no imagery, really, and it didn't really ...

I like this a lot! It's got good imagery, and I really liked the personification of the 'sentient puddle'. In some areas I felt rather confused, and had to re-read ...

Well, you already have a bunch of reviews/comments, but I feel like giving you a review anyway! :P I really enjoyed this poem. It was quite fascinating, and I loved ...

I liked this! I am not sure if it was meant to be humorous, but especially this stanza... Why! My skin is of the finest silk, The softest in the ...

What?! You...murdered Morgan? Gasp! I have to say though, I was immensely surprised by this. I have to agree with borntobeawriter that I feel skipped out of a great story. ...

Wow, I really really love this! It's very description, has great imagery and paints a cute picture of childhood bliss. I think you should divide this into paragraphs or stanzas, ...

I liked this quite a bit. I'd like to first point out that you have an irregular pattern however. The first two stanzas match in length, and then suddenly it's ...

I like this. You use a lot of imagery and it paints a pretty picture. Quite nice. Standing lonesome, silent, on the dusty windowsill, In tarnished silver, brilliant and white, ...

Wow, I love this. I really do. I don't even know why I like it so much, but I literally, *literally* couldn't stop reading. Anyhow, I agree that the huge ...

I stare at my older sister, Lina. Her black tank top's folded up to reveal from her ribs down and it looks disgusting. And I mean like, Jimmy eating a ...

Rascalover pointed out some of the things I saw, but I'll give this a review anyhow. This caught my interest, which is good, because this isn't the kind of thing ...

I agree with IcyFlame. This looks interesting, but the bad punctuation and the way it was written really threw me off and CONFUSED me. I get that a terrible rain ...