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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Unknown

    Hey Dragon, I've finally got a bit of time as I don't have an exam tomorrow, so let's see what we can do with this piece. I warn you, though, ...

    Jun 10, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)

    Hello Worx, Before I actually start the review, I want to just say that after this chapter, I am even more amazed at your capacity as a writer. There is ...

    Jun 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Unknown

    Hey Dragon :) (Yeah, I'll never lose the name) I'm really sorry, but I'm not going to be able to give this my usual line by line rip. I've got ...

    Jun 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hurtful smiles

    Hi Dudette, This isn't the sort of stuff that I usually review, but in your case I'll make an exception. Flash fiction usually limits you to describing a moment, a ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Unknown

    Hey Dragon Here's my promised review. :) I hope it helps: “You’re right. I’m not doing this for you. I’m doing this for me. Because I’m a selfish son-of-a-bitch.” You've ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Ender's Game

    Ender's Game? Easily one of my top five favorite books. :) I thought that the ending had a great twist and made you think a lot. I don't know if ...

    May 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Imo: Split personality

    Hi there Dudette :) Here's the review that I promised: Staring across the silent, stuffy room, I stifled a yawn. As an opener this isn't bad. You could do much ...

    May 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I don't know :P (and springrain chose the title, so ha!)

    Snoink! :lol: The person I really hate the most Has gotta be the internet personality known as Toast! Hey wait! I've been called Toast before... And I'm an internet personality. ...

    May 18, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lily Foxglove (1) *edited*

    Hey Dudette I don't have that much time, but I'm going to see how much of a review I can write in any case. I'm only going to point out ...

    May 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: I Need You To Write. - 1. Part 1.

    Hey Emma, Before I review, I just want to say how much I loved this piece. You managed to capture an atmosphere that is intriguing and mystical. I'd like to ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Emanon - Prologue

    Hey Terps ;) I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to review this before now, but I've been really busy with school and all, so I hope you'll forgive me. ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)

    Hey Worx, Here is my promised review. I've been really busy, so I'm sorry I haven't had time to do this before now. I'm going to do a more general ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A short story I'm working on reposted in the right place.

    Hello Blank, Let's see what we can do here. I do suggest, though, that before you go further you come up with a strong plot. You need something to drive ...

    May 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hiya Rosey! :) I will try to do as good a job as I can with this piece. Let's see where it takes us. ^_^ The rock grated and screeched, ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: So You Want to Rule the World?

    Hello! :) Oh, I love reviewing pieces as good as this one. I get to focus on less nitpicks and comment more on the actual content. I have therefore given ...

    Apr 23, 2009


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
— Kaia