Mageheart

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D Like usual, I love the world building. And Master Zhong-xin seems like a pretty nice guy. I can't wait ...

Hi outvaders! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I got a kick out of this. Fate being an actual person made me laugh, and the title, like with ...

Hi Zolen! Mage here to do the promised review! :D While reading this, I found myself getting a kick out of the video game aspect, laughing at some of the ...

Hi outvaders! Mage here to do the promised review! :D As other people have also said, this is my first time reading and reviewing flash fiction. From my sudden acquaintance ...

Hi Micro (is it alright if I call you that?)! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I admit I'm a bit confused. The last chapter was labeled "Homework ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to review this story! :D Hello, Zhong-xin! We finally get to meet Marthan's master. Please tell me when you upload next, by the way. I wanted ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to do the promised review! :D Once again, I loved this chapter! I'm really excited to see what happens next, so I'll go review Chapter 3 ...

Hi, Anarchy! (Is it alright if I call you that?) Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D I really l love reading this story. I can't wait to ...

Hi Gymnast! (Is it alright if I call you that?) Mage here to review your story! :D In this chapter, the reader finally learns about Opel's past. We also get ...

Hi MicrohieraxFT! Mage here to do the promised review! Uh-oh. Willy's missing...Who says he'll be alive when found? Okay, that was a surprisingly morbid thought. Let's get to the review, ...

Hi Savvy! Mage here to review! :D I loved reading this story. I was confused about the backspaces at first, but as the story went on, I understood. My favorite ...

Hi Far1812! Mage here to review! :D This short story blew my mind. I've never heard of a hero who would chose death over saving the world. You bring up ...

Hi Gymnast2801! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I like this chapter. I can see where it's heading, but that's not a bad thing. Let's get to the ...

Hi yizhongt! Mage here to do the promised review! :D Still feeling the Star Wars vibe, but in a good way. And, like before, your world building continues to impress ...

Hi Gymnast2801! Mage here to review your story! :D First off, I love Smudge. I mean, I love the characters. (As all cat owners know, cats are the most important ...