MaddieNicolette

ok so i actualy have not watched sherlock, however this peice could be used for any character and i really appriete it because i cant write poetry. I am a ...

That is Halarious! omg thats really all i have to say, but i want to make it a review so i will pick it apart i guess. "Family members mourn ...

ok well i like these! few suggestions "Looking like a mirror far, far up high It's radiant and bright and glistens and glows," ok so this just doesnt seem to ...

ummm.... ok so going to be honest here im really confused. im gonna try to take this peice by piece. also i have never written poetry so maybe im wrong. ...

ok let me begin with this is soooooooooooooooooo cute! so this might be long im going to pick this apart piece by piece. lets begin :) " Dear future husband, ...

Omg!! Can i just say this perfectly describes me reading anything. This was such a perfect protrail of a girl reading a book. The great thing about this is that ...

This is fantastic! Like honestly this is really good, and so cute!, few notes/comments One: i kinda liked the whole repeating the soul part, however there was something that kinda ...

Ok so i honestly cant rip this to shreds cause i cant write lyric to save my life. but i will try my hardest to help. kinda. oh well here ...

wow!!! That is so cool how you did that transitions, its like you are actually on the boat fishing! i loved how the way you described things. this was really ...

Hey So i havent read your other works so im not sure how this is going to go down, but here we go. "In the early morning, every alarm clock ...

Hi so first off, i dont know how this review will end up for i have not read your other chapters, i will do my best. " Her sweat stuck ...

ok love that you made it your own. few things tho one: ok first the dialoge at the beginning is the same in the movie. i understood what you were ...

Wow i loved this. at first i thought it was kinda meloncholy but in the end everything worked out. Great Great Great. loved the comparisons. loved that you took it ...

"We have been married since 25 years. " i think this would sound better if you said married for 25 years now. something like that. but its up to you. ...

This is really good, a few ideas tho. God maybe should be capitalized... or not up to you and what your trying to say. Also who are we looking for?? ...