Hello there TheSilentBagpipe!
IceWinifredd here for a review! First of all, I really like the idea behind the lyrics of this song. 'Home is where the heart is' is what a lot of people say these days. I also like how it's so easy to relate to and that the lyrics themselves have a way of painting a vivid picture in your mind and making you feel a foreign longing for your home. The only thing I would suggest that you change is the wording in a sense that it seems too manufactured and it doesn't sound very natural. I actually ran into the same problem on one of my songs as well and someone was kind enough to point it out. Other than that, I really liked this piece and I would you continue to write more lyrics. Have a great day! -IceWinifredd
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