MOIMOW

I liked it. Everything that I saw to be fixed already was by other reviewers So maybe I shouldn't be wasting your time with my review, but I just had ...

We've all been there, haven't we? Especially inside jokes. I know I hate inside jokes I don't get, but I'm totally a hypocrite, because I have so many inside jokes, ...

I, too, didn't get it 'til the end, and then it hit me. And I liked the feeling that happened when it hit me. So, if your goal was to ...

You're awesome, dude. I LOVED it. I guess what I should say is thank you for blessing the world with this specimen of pure perfection. Or does that go a ...

Hey! This is really good. I forgive your language. I hear worse in school hallways every day. I have to admit, I had to google Spetsnaz. One paragraph didn't make ...

Well, I liked it. If I know what story you were trying to tell with this, and I think and really hope I do, this is like one of those ...

I won't go on and on about how much I liked this. (But I did!) The other reviewers have taken care of that for me. :) My one complaint was ...

You have this physical need to write something. You want so badly,to put the picture behind your eyes onto paper so other people can see it the way you do. ...

Okay, I'll admit, I'm being pulled in. I thought I'd just take a quick look to see what it was about...and I read both chapters. As for POVs, right now ...

Okay, you've sufficently depressed me for today. :) Or I suppose I should do a :( As I was reading this, I was thinking two things. One: Wow, you must ...

Hey. This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside too. Not. So, yeah. You creeped me out a little, but in a good way. The lines sometimes felt uneven, ...

Alright, I love this story.There had better be more. (I'm not threatening you, I'm just asking. Strongly. Without ever taking no for an answer.) A couple of things I noticed. ...

No wonder my dog barks at them... Neat-o little story. (No one says neat-o anymore, do they?) I liked it. I just saw a few grammatical errors I thought I'd ...

Hey Wolfy! I liked this. I didn't like the brother, though. What a jerk. There are some places where your spelling and phrases get a little iffy. For example: A ...

Hey. I enjoyed this story. I liked the MC very much. I think the thing this story needs most is a spell check. I noticed some errors in that category. ...